Daz Top Status Member


Joined : 06 Jan 2007 Posts : 382 Localisation : Macclesfield, Cheshire.
 | Subject: The Meaning Of Life And Everything. Wed 9 Jan 2008 - 22:10 | |
| The Meaning Of Life And Everything.
As I look through life towards deaths dark veil.
I hope for the light of life to prevail.
The light of hope we all must see.
The hope for all humanity.
There must be hope or else we die.
Not ever knowing the reason why.
We go and labour every day.
To earn the money so to pay.
For the food we eat and life sustain.
Then back to work full circle again.
The meaning of life is within the beholder.
Not without where life is colder.
So look within to the goodness there.
And if you find enough to share.
Then that’s the time to look outside.
And give yourself to those that hide.
Behind the mask of false ideal.
Afraid to show just how they feel.
For meeting you can show them why.
With a little love we can all get by.
©DWSmith. 09/01/08.
>> Back to Index to Daz's Poems >> _________________ My family are like stars in the night sky of my life. Always there at the end of the day. The light of their love forever constant as the Northern star. Safely guiding me home. Dreams are the realities of tomorrow. Everyone is in tune with the spirits of their ancestors. Unfortunately some are tone deaf. Copyright. Daz.2008. |
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Joined : 06 Oct 2006 Posts : 4910 Localisation : Blackburn, Lancashire
 | Subject: Re: The Meaning Of Life And Everything. Thu 10 Jan 2008 - 22:37 | |
| Thank you Daz, that's really good. I like the way you've phrased this verse. It gets the message across so well in these few lines, the feeling and meaning of what you're expressing here.
The meaning of life is within the beholder. Not without where life is colder. So look within to the goodness there. And if you find enough to share. Then that’s the time to look outside. And give yourself to those that hide. Behind the mask of false ideal. Afraid to show just how they feel.
It's wonderful, Cas xx
PS - Have added it to your Index. Might be others need to be added - I'll do a check now  |
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