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Daz
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PostSubject: An even playing field.   Fri 12 Oct 2007 - 22:51

This poem in no way promotes smoking. Just the rights of those that do.

An even playing field



The worlds gone helter skelter
We're together in a shelter
And no one here is waiting
for a bus.

The world outside is screaming
The air we breath out here needs cleaning
I'm just smoking here and dreaming
what's the fuss.

There's trucks blow carcigenic smoke
From blowpipes that will make you choke
But it's ciggarettes that make you croke
Insight.

Your rightious and your PC eye
One day will grow a PC sty
But your blind already now bye bye
Who's right.

I'm smokin' ,walkin', talkin', Jokin'
In kitchens at parties that was provokin
But now they make me go and stand outside.
So what.

I don't complain, see their point of view
Which is more that I can say of you
If it's lonely you can join us too
Why not.

Copyright D W Smith 2007.


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My family are like stars in the night sky of my life.
Always there at the end of the day.
The light of their love forever constant as the Northern star.
Safely guiding me home.
Dreams are the realities of tomorrow.
Everyone is in tune with the spirits of their ancestors. Unfortunately some are tone deaf.
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PostSubject: Re: An even playing field.   Fri 2 Nov 2007 - 18:47

I love the flow of this Daz - its almost a rap isn't it!!
More I come back to read it, more I love it!!

Good stuff!! Very Happy

Cas
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PS; Its included in your Index now too - just been updating Great Stuff!!
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