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Daz
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PostSubject: Summer Sun   Thu 17 May 2007 - 21:29

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Summer Sun.


Long hot days lying under rays.

Of a long lost summer sun.

Long lost days lived in the haze.

Of a life that had just begun.

Chasing girls on the beach.

Dreams of love within reach.

One moment here the next moment gone.

Walking hand in hand.

Footprints in the sand.

You were the only one.


Life was great and there for the living.

Selfish in love all taking not giving.

Sooner or later all this misbehaving.

Was going to take its toll.

For love like a promise is lost when you break it.

So think of the promise like love when you make it.

Or end up alone let someone else take it.

Now I’m the fool alone.


Long hot days lying under rays.

Of a long lost summer sun.

Wishing back the hands of time.

To when you were mine.

And life was so much fun.


Now those days have gone.

And life has moved on.

I’m not that boy anymore.

But what I wouldn’t give.

Hand in hand to relive.

That walk by the edge of the shore.


© D W Smith 2007-05-17




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PostSubject: Re: Summer Sun   Fri 18 May 2007 - 0:41

Wonderful again Daz. well done

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PostSubject: Re: Summer Sun   Fri 18 May 2007 - 6:47

Another good one Daz with a sad ending Laughing

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sorry mattycats image seems to have vanished-maxine
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PostSubject: Re: Summer Sun   Fri 18 May 2007 - 21:47

Hi Chellin, Mattycat.
Thanks a lot for your e's. I really appreciate what you think.
Great animation mattycat.
I will just keep practicing untill I write the good ones.
I thiink they are ok now but if I could spend more time I think
the depth would improve.
My 10 year old plays guitar and is really good as he sight reads now. Mikey the 8 year old whirlwind has started learning drums and seems pretty good so far. I used to play trombone and can play keyboards one hand only, so maybe we could start a band (Gerry hatrick and the pacemakers)....lol
And maybe I could write the songs. Although by the time they're old enough I will be bob Zimmer man Dillon.
Still I could leave them a book of verse in my will. It might make up for the lack of money...lol
Talk soon and thanks.
Love to all.
Daz
xxx
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My family are like stars in the night sky of my life.
Always there at the end of the day.
The light of their love forever constant as the Northern star.
Safely guiding me home.
Dreams are the realities of tomorrow.
Everyone is in tune with the spirits of their ancestors. Unfortunately some are tone deaf.
Copyright. Daz.2008.
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